Counting Droplets – /SATWE 12/28/13, Details) Late

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I’ve tried counting droplets in a waterfall

The sounds of water falling,rushing, roaring

Entrancing me like dancers at a ball

Lights of rainbows dance on water pouring

Entwining droplets making streams

Into the basin at the bottom causing mist

Contented as I often feel in dreams

Why do I feel as if I have been kissed

The spray, gentle upon my skin

Makes the sound of water falling a melody

I can hear it softly as if it is has been

Played somewhere on harps just for me

Anonymously without my seeing

Feelings of ecstasy,  rise  within my being



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