I NEED YOUR IMPUT….PLS

Filed in Gather Writing Essential by on April 19, 2012 0 Comments

I have been granted the honor of having one of my poems printed in a local Poetry Anthology.  Please give me your honest opinion of what you think about this one as it is my very first attempt at free style. (Up until now my poems have been metered and rhymed.)

PATTERNS

Prisms of tiny rainbows

Dance about my room as the

Moonlight reflects off the raindrops

On my window creating

Colors and graceful patterns

That tenderly caress the shadows

Not only in my room,

But also in my mind.

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By: Vicki Lynn  2012

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A mother of 4 girls. The youngest has Down Syndrome and graduated from high school this year. I am a homebody who enjoys reading, writing, watch tv, play on the computer and love to create a variety of crafts. My son-in-law is in the Airforce and takes p

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