Pattern (Haiku)

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For John Walter, who jumpstarted an interest in consciousness by introducing me to Susan Blackmore and Daniel Dennett over a year ago, and who still prods life with new ideas and and an insatiable curiousity.

 

streams run into rivers

ceaseless flow scours holes, silts dams

worlds mimic themselves

 

 Ed Nudelman has pointed out that this had 6 syllables in the first line.  He also suggested that the comma in line 2 be removed.  At Susan Budig's suggestion, I am posting as an addendum this revision.

 

streams run to rivers

ceaseless flow scours holes silts dams

worlds mimic themselves 

 

 

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