I hope you enjoyed your Motherâ€™s Day week off, and for those of you who contributed pieces, you get 300,000 brownie points! Â (That’s a hyperbole.)
Todayâ€™s poetry device is as easy as todayâ€™s prose point-of-view is challenging, methinks.Â Which prompt you tackle will speak volumes in front of God and everybody about your moral character.Â
Todayâ€™s poetry device, or rhetorical figure, is onomatopoeia!Â (I will have you know I spelled that right the first timeâ€¦)Â Onomatopoeia is a word which sounds like the object (i.e. a sound or something noisy) it describes.Â Theyâ€™re everywhere you look!Â In fact, theyâ€™re so ubiquitous I donâ€™t think I need to dig out a bunch of examples from literature.Â Some examples of onomatopoeia words:
The list is endless.Â Two examples from literature:
â€œInspire them with such a longing as will make his thought/Alive like patterns a murmuration of starlingsâ€¦â€ W.H. Auden
â€œAnd the bees weighted with pollen/Move heavily in the vine-shoots:/chirrâ€”chirrâ€”chirâ€”rkkâ€”a purring soundâ€¦â€Â Ezra Pound
Onomatopoeia can be really fun if you invent the word (who can forget Ian Flemingâ€™s Chitty Chitty Bang Bang?), or apply the onomatopoeia to something unexpected.Â My poem â€œProcrastinationâ€ makes good use of onomatopoeia, alliteration, and other techniques of poetic diction.Â Use your imagination!Â Have fun!
Our prose narrative point of view is Subjective Narration. Subjective narration is first-person narrative by an unreliable narrator.Â The narrator of the story is an amateur, telling a story that happened to him/her relatively recently. Â This is also true of diary and letter narration, but in subjective narration, we do not have the cues of the diary or letter to tell us this is the case.Â We must rely on the diction of the speaker (it may be written in dialect to one extent or another), the speakerâ€™s biases, or the limitations of the speakerâ€™s knowledge or self-awareness.Â As with dramatic monologue, the reader may or may not be aware of who is being spoken to.
If this sounds vague and daunting, read the examples.Â Subjective narration is a wonderful humor device.Â Woody Allen loves to use first-person narrators who have hilariously inflated opinions of their intellectual or sexual prowess.Â Steve Martinâ€™s â€œDear Amandaâ€ (yes, itâ€™s a series of letters, but never mind that) is a riot, as is Simon Richâ€™s â€œHey, Lookâ€.Â But our first example is an absolute classic and gets pride of place here:
Woody Allen: â€œMy Philosophyâ€ paragraph 1.
Woody Allen: â€œA Little Louder, Pleaseâ€ Click â€œLook Insideâ€ or mouseover the book cover.Â In the â€œsearch insideâ€ box, type â€œlittle louderâ€ and click â€œGo.â€ Click the second search result; it says â€œPage 74â€.Â The preview only lets you read the first page of the story, but youâ€™ll get the idea.
Steve Martin: â€œDear Amandaâ€ Click â€œLook Insideâ€ or mouseover the book cover.Â In the â€œsearch insideâ€ box, type â€œDear Amandaâ€ and click â€œGo.â€ Click the result that says â€œPage 26â€.Â This preview will let you read the whole piece.
Poetry: Write a poem which uses the device of onomatopoeia.Â Extra credit for coining a new word.
Prose: Write a story (max. 1000 words) using the narrative point of view of Subjective Narration.
- PutÂ SunWE in the title and tags.
- Indicate in some way which devices/techniques/figures I should be paying attention to if itâ€™s not self-evident.
- Deadlines are open.Â This prompt does not turn into a pumpkin a week from today.Â If youâ€™re piece isnâ€™t done by next Sunday, get it in when you can.Â This is supposed to be fun.
- I will comment on every submission and include a link to it in the next column.
- If you would like a little more academic critique–but still very friendly and positive–include the word “rigorous” in your post (e.g. “rigorous critique wanted”).
Here are the responses to last weekâ€™s prompt.Â Let me know if I missed yours.Â I hope you can take a few minutes and read some of the other submissions.
This weekâ€™s contributors revisited a variety of techniques:
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